Similarly to an flower just born
It was dancing on the edge of nowhere
Similarly to an tear just realized
It was shining on the edge of unrealized
Similerly to an star just created
It was dreaming on the edge of undreamed
Similerly to an pearl just composed
It was observing on the edge of unpurified
My heart for you
Fulfilled and vulnerable
Let it be beautiful 
I consider a good poem, one I read three times, and enjoy it more and more each time. As I read yours, I enjoyed that experience. Thank you.
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Thank you so much💝
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Very nice lines.. 🙂
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Thank you
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That was a wonderful read! Loved your lines especially – “dancing on the edge of nowhere”. Beautiful, indeed!
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Thank you so much,appreciate it💝
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I liked the repetition of “Similarly . . .” in this poem!
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Thank you for your review,
appreciate it.💕
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Writing of a talented poet! Superb!
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Aw thank you so much🙆
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It is so deep, so ecstatic!
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Appreciate your insight and opinion,thank you so much💗
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No problem 🙂
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Love these comments ^no problem^😄Make me laugh.
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I know. I am very clumsy when the time comes to accept compliments!
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